Saturday, October 2, 2010

You collect your thoughts and you firmly believe what you must do now. Even if this...thing was somehow civilized, there is no way it will be after it wakes up. You pull out your map and try to gauge where you are. Unfortunately since there is no way to tell where the sun is in this overcast forest, you are a little unsure of where to go. But nevertheless you know you don't have a lot of time. You grab the blanket and lay it out and start to grab any and every thing around that you think might be useful. You grab the corners of the blankets and tie them together and sling it over your shoulder. Your head and neck still aches as you are struggling under the weight. You slowly head in between the trees. It gets darker and darker and the trees get closer together. They trees become so dense that you can barely squeeze yourself and the blanket through. You hear no noise or sounds except the crackling of the small branches under your feet. All of a sudden you hear what you think it a growl from behind you. You stop and flip around. Nothing but darkness...you continue walking but in a much quieter way. All of a sudden out of nowhere you take a step and your foot falls through a hole in the ground that was covered with dead branches and dirt. Before you can try to stop yourself, you fly forward into the dark pit and fall an easy 10 feet down. The branches and blanket bag crash down on top of you. After a few minutes of the shock wearing off, you feel a increasing pain in your left leg. The pain is now unbearable. It must be broken. You don't know what to do . Stuck in a whole with no way out. The days pass as you try anything you can to get out of the hole. Your leg hurts and becomes more swollen. You feel your stomach painfully yearning for food and your mouth parched from no water. After a few days, you realize that no one is coming to find you....you close your eyes...and go into your final sleep.


THE END




Thank you everyone for your comments and participation! Now I am giving you another option, would you like to:
1. Conitinue the story from the last decision and hope that the story continues?
Or
2. Start a completely new story and fresh start? (which I would also accept ideas for)
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23 comments:

kmartsmartsuperstar said...

2. Space Adventure!

Liv said...

that was sad =(( start a new one! I don't know what about though

Ergine said...

1. Conitinue the story from the last decision and hope that the story continues?

DEFINETLY

rockStar said...

supportin you! <3

Michele said...

Cool :D

Gillyjpb said...

nice

Nailgun said...

Wheres the option where I keep my thumb on the page and peek ahead

Splash87 said...

I am with kmartsmartsuperstar

2. TO SPACE!

Food said...

I guess start a new one, since I just started following.

Jeremy Calvinton said...

I like the blog, but the text feels a bit too big.

Kevorkian said...

Me too! new new!

Dan Smelter said...

Aww.
New story!
I agree, something Sci-Fi maybe?
:)

jrep said...

1. Please continue

Lewis Candler said...

1. finish!

NerfQuake said...

Excellent story, loved it.

J. Antonio said...

Nice post!
I like this blog, I'll follow you to read it frequently

Touch and Feel said...

Sad..but I liked it!

Luke Pauly said...

i say just go to space

Joebloggs said...

Post another, I'm only jsut after seeing this it was great!

Katie Greene said...

second option. always the second option.

also, normally i'd be happy that you disabled your blogger header, but this time now i gotta follow your blog the old fashioned way.

thanks for visiting the 16th parallel! KG

jeanjean said...

Go for the 2nd one

kmartsmartsuperstar said...

Option one. Good chance for space monsters :)

HonBlogger said...

number one, def!

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